Monday, March 5, 2007

Voices in the Wind


In the middle of spring when all of the flowers in the royal garden were in full bloom the Chinese imperial family was blessed by the birth of a set of beautiful, healthy baby twins; one boy and one girl. The Emperor and Empress were so excited by the birth, since twin births were very uncommon, and having a set of twins was considered to be an honorable blessing by the gods. The twins were considered a miracle birth among the villagers; the Emperor and Empress had the village fortune teller decide suitable names for their children. She decided to name the boy, Wei-Shan which means greatness because she foretold that he was to accomplish great things in his future. The fortune teller named their baby girl Mei-Li, which means beautiful or pretty, because the infant would grow up to be beautiful inside and out, so much so that she would be the envy of all the women in the land and the fantasy of all the men.
As the children grew, they became inseparable, and they loved to play in the garden of the palace with each other. Wei-Shan would taunt all the fish in the pond and Mei-Li would pick flowers and scold her brother for being mean to the fish. However, the children’s boundaries were the high stone walls of the palace they were told not to ever go beyond the palace gates. So to get around this, their favorite thing to do was to climb the palace walls and sit on top and watch the villages go about their daily business; buying, selling, and trading items for necessities like food or fabric for clothing. So many times did they both wonder what it would be like to be a villager.
When the children grew into their teenage years, Wei-Shan started training to become emperor so that he could ascend the throne when their father died. The emperor was so happy when his son was born because that meant that the royal line would continue within their family. Wei-Shan was doing very well with his training going with the foretelling at his birth that he would accomplish great things. Mei-Li was also living up to her name, she had become one of the most beautiful women in China, and her glowing personality could be felt by all who were in her presence; suitors from far and wide came to ask for her hand in marriage she wanted none of them. Her family told her that she had to find a husband and the New Year’s festival or she would bring great dishonor to her whole family, this distressed her especially because that was the night that Wei-Shan would be presented as the heir to the throne. Ever since her brother had started his training, everyone’s energy was pretty much focused on him so it gave her opportunities to sneak out of the palace and roam the village. Mei-Li loved to roam the village; she loved to hear the chaos of the carts going back and forth, watching the children play in the marketplace.
One afternoon as she walked through the village marketplace she turned a corner and saw her uncle talking to another man. Right when she was about to say hello she over heard them talking about her brother. Her uncle has always been jealous of her father because since he was older, her grandfather chose her father to ascend the throne after him. If her brother had not been born, he would get to rule but since she and her brother had been born his chance at the throne was gone. As Mei-Li listened to the two men’s conversation, she heard them plotting to kill her brother at the New Year’s festival that night!! Right when they were going to present Wei-Shan on the balcony of the palace as the heir to the throne they would attack and hopefully kill the Emperor as well. When Mei-Li heard this she ran back to the palace. She searched all over looking for her father, when she found him she said, “Father!! You and Wei-Shan are in great danger!! We must not go the festival tonight!!” her father looked at her puzzled and said to her, “my child why must you make up stories?” Mei-Li tried to protest, but before she said anything she stopped not wanting to tell her father that she had been going to the village she said, “If you don’t believe me, I’ll prove it tonight at the festival.”

The New Year’s festival was always one of Mei-Li’s favorite festivals there were beautiful lanterns that hung from wires above, the streets smelt of wonderful New Year’s treats and there were people everywhere. Usually Mei-Li would be so excited but not this time, after her father didn’t believe her earlier this afternoon she was determined to protect both him and Wei-Shan from her uncle.
In the palace everyone was rushing around trying get Wei-Shan properly dressed for the presentation ceremony. While in the waiting room Mei-Li told one of the head maids that she wanted to speak to her brother the maid nodded and quickly rushed the other attendants out of the room. When they were gone she told her brother what she heard in the village earlier. Wei-Shan was instantly worried, “What should I do?! I don’t want to die!! Mei-Li!! What do I do?!?!” Mei-Li calmed her brother down and said,
”Shhhh!! I have a plan let me wear your robes and veil. I’ll go and be presented as you” Wei-Shan looked at her confused and said, “but what if they try to kill you?” Mei-Li looked at her brother and said, “There’s no time to explain just give me your clothes and make sure father doesn’t go outside.” She was right, there was no time Wei-Shan quickly gave her the robes and veil and rushed out to find their father. Moments later the attendants came back to present her as heir to the throne thinking that she was Wei-Shan they opened the doors and the crowds went wild. Mei-Li took a few steps out the door and suddenly an arrow filled with poison hit her straight in the neck the poison rushed through her body and she fell to the ground dying instantly. All the attendants ran outside to pull the body of what they thought was Wei-Shan inside; at that same moment the doors to the waiting room flew open and the Emperor and Wei-Shan came rushing in. The attendants looked up and saw Wei-Shan and were very confused, they lifted up the veil of the body and gasped. When Wei-Shan saw the limp body of Mei-Li he ran over and cried, “She did this to save me! She risked her life to save me!” The emperor looked at the body of his dead daughter and began to cry, “She tried to warn me,” He said, “I thought she made it up.” The emperor told his guards to go find his brother and bring him to the palace; the guards nodded and ran off. When they returned, with him they threw him in the palace torture chamber. The emperor rushed down to the chambers, he looked his brother straight in the eye and with sorrow and pain in his voice said, “My daughter is dead, because of you I am shamed to call you my brother, you have shamed our family name and you have brought pain and sorrow to my family. Since you are my brother, I will not kill though that would satisfy me, I want you to leave this land and if I hear any word that you were near this province then I will kill you.”
The next day the entire palace immediately began preparations for Mei-Li’s funeral. She was to be buried with the ancestors and she was to be dressed in the traditional funeral garments. Everyone was rushing about the palace in preparation, everyone except Wei-Shan. He had taken the death of Mei-Li the hardest out of anyone, for weeks after her death he could be seen just sitting in the garden underneath Mei-Li’s favorite blossom tree sobbing and asking, “Why? Did you do it? Why did you save me?!” He vowed to himself that he would become the best emperor ever and he would make Mei-Li proud of him.
In the years following, Wei-Shan finally ascended the throne and the first thing he did was place a plaque in the garden right underneath the tree with Mei-Li’s name and it also said the Buddhist saying, Life is instantaneous, and living is dying. Wei-Shan became one of the best emperors that the province has ever seen but every so often the palace attendants would find him sitting beneath the blossom tree in the garden, talking to Mei-Li and listening to her voice through the wind.

7 comments:

j said...

I really liked your story and how you chose to tell it. You were able to use great detail and aspects of the Chinese culture to make your story very believable. The names that you chose for the characters also fitted in well with the story. I thought that it was so sad when she sacrificed herself for her only brother, so he could take the throne. Your story was able to make me want to keep reading to find out what would happen in the end. Great Job!!

EmilyG said...

What I like most about this story is that it was unpredictable. I had no idea what was going to happen to any of the characters. Its unfortunate that Mei-Li had to die, but it shows her devotion to her brother and family. I alsor eally enjoyed that they were named according to their predicted futures. Is this a common Chinese tradition?

sbudar said...

I really liked this story. It kept me drawn in from the beginning to the end. The plot was strong, and your descriptions were vivid. I liked how you began at the births of these children and followed them through their lives. It was a little sad at the end, but that sadness was the perfect touch to the story. Great Story!

River said...

It's amazing that Mei-Li gave her life for her brother. And although her death may seem horrible and tragic, it really serves as motivation for Wei-Shan to become a better Emperor. I really liked the line you used which relates to this topic: "living is dying." You need death in order to really appreciate life as you showed with Wei-Shan.

gimmec0okies said...

This story was interesting from the very first sentence. I couldn't stop reading it until the very end. It's like one of those old asian folk tales (which I love reading). It was very unfortunate that her father didn't believe Mei-Li and that she didn't have time to explain everything to her brother. She was very brave, and I really like how you ended the story with how the brother talks to her and listens to her voice through the wind.

Zooey said...

This was such a sad story, I was hoping for a clever ending! Why did Mei-Li have to die? Not even the fortune telling in the beginning told of the sad ending. When the plot to kill the emperor arose I was sure that everything would be alright becuase she would be able to reveal the plot before the festival. But I was sad when the Emperor didnt believe her, I wonder why he didnt believe her. I loved your story, the names of your characters fit in and I liked how they were named for their futures.

~c said...

Great Story! I really like the connection with the ancient voices and the way the girl's voice was being heard in the wind. Very awesome!